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AIDEN D BY LUKE He walked into the room with a lovely smile, Nike high top shoes like Zayn Mayluk, teeth white as a cloud in a sunny day, kiddie short sleeve t-shirt with black skinny jeans. Hair carefully flicked to the side, lips dry as sand paper. Ears round as half a circle, hair black as a black texture in the sun light, with a basketball on his hand. Nails chewed like a dog chewing on a bone, eyes browner than a log, with cheeks red as a rose. Can you guess who it is?
BETTY BY SARAH Betty ran into her house holding her yellow flower dress, with her red rose hair going back and forward. She saw her mum, and smiled to her with her crystal white teeth and red lipstick on her lips. On the way to photo class, she took a picture of herself. She looked like a girl with red hair and a pointy nose and dark blue eyes. And with her deep voice she said, “I look very nice today!”
MY DAD BY WINNIE He is as tanned as a bar of chocolate. His eyes are big and bulgy as a cute puppy begging for something. He is as bald as an eagle. He likes to tickle me and joke around. His nose is a slope like a slide. His two front teeth are chipped from footy, but the rest are as straight as a pencil. Everything is perfect except his cooking.
COCO BY OLIVIA N Coco is a kind and loving person with hair the colour of the sun on a sunny day, a face as soft as a baby’s bottom, teeth as white as a white board. Her legs are very long and skinny. Eyes the colour of chocolate. Her personality is nice, loving, cheeky and funny. Coco was born on the 7th of July 2003. I love spending time with her.
DEAN BY SAMIR Dean has hair as brown as caramel. When Dean looks into the sun his eyes turn as green as an alien. Dean’s skin is tanned. Dean’s gums are as red as a red car. Dean’s shoes are as blue as Neptune.
ELLA BY EMMA Her eyes are as blue as the sky on a warm sunny day. Ella has red lips as a beautiful as a red ribbon and she has hair as brown as milk chocolate which she flicks to the side. She likes to wear turquoise tops, lavender skirts with a black band and roses, and white boots as white as the clouds. Her skin is as fair as Snow White. She has purple sparkly nails and her nose is as round as a grapefruit. She has a voice as loud as a siren.
MY BEST FRIEND ENZO, BY MAX He has blond hair and it is also as long as girl’s hair. He has blue eyes as blue as the sky. He is funnier than a clown. He is the best rugby player I know. He has a bit of brown hair. His teeth are as sparkly as diamonds; he is faster than Usain Bolt. He is a smarty pants because he is so smart. He looks like Niall from One Direction. I think he compares with to opera singer.
MY SISTER FLORENCE , BY ELSA Florence has as a heart shaped face. She has two thin eyebrows that are light. Florence has small ears and skin the color of olive. She hasn’t lost any baby teeth yet so she has twenty baby teeth inside two thin lips. Her hands are quite big for her age and she can get very stubborn and annoying. When she’s being nice I like to play with her. GRANDMA BY YASMIN Her skin is as soft as a pillow and eyes shaded as a beautiful hazel. She carries a handbag shaded the loveliest tan. Nails painted perfectly as a fresh apple. And she is as friendly as a gold fish, her voice is as firm as a dog’s bark, and makes desserts WAY better than a chef.
THERE ONCE WAS A MAN NAMED HARRY ,BY FLOSSIE His hair was like loads of one centimetre sticks and was as brown as dirt. He wears lots of stripy T – shirts like a zebra. He is so strong he can pick me up and hang me on his shoulder like Santa’s sack! He is very good at drawing. His teeth are as white as snow and he has the eyes of milk chocolate. He is my dad.
MY SISTER LEAH ,BY DEAN My sister Leah has tanned skin. Her hair is like chocolate. Chocolate! Her hair is not long. Brown eyes like a brownie. She has a huge smile. She is mainly funny, happy and she is very friendly. She is very calm. Her favourite colours are blue, pink and yellow. She is funnier than a clown. She is very fast.
LUCIA BY OLIVIA M My sister Lucia has eyes as blue as a blue sky on a sunny day. Her hair is a nice soft brown with little curls and a very curly fringe. When she walks in the room she pulls annoying faces only that I can see. She has perfectly white teeth with one little black tooth. It’s freaky when she puts her jaw in front of her top teeth. She even has dimples as cute as a new Labrador puppy. Even though she’s really annoying I still love her!
LUKE BY AIDEN Luke has chocolate brown eyes and hair the colour of a macchiato. He also has a deep soft dimple on each cheek that appears whenever he smiles. His skin is like an olive dipped in olive oil, teeth the colour of marble and perfect shell pink nails.
OLIVIA BY ELIZA Hair as brown as chocolate. Olivia’s lips were as red as a rose, skin as smooth as a flower. Olivia’s teeth were as white as snow. She loves playing with troll dolls and so do I. We both play together with my other best friend Tayla. We both love each other as friends. Olivia and I are best friends.
MY FRIEND SARAH, BY CAMILLA Sarah always has her hair nicely tied back into a pony tail. She has a HUGE mouth always ready to laugh and she has such a long and pointy nose. Her hair is long and a sort of chocolate color. Her eyebrows are brown and are like two big bushy caterpillars. Sarah’s eye lashes are quite long - I think about two centimetres long. She has big teeth like a rabbit’s. But she is great friend.
WINNIE BY HOLLY Her skin is very fair. Her hair is as straight as pencils, her eyes are very hazel. She is as nice as the queen. She likes to wear a t-shirt and bike shirts. She has very neat writing; her teeth are very white like very white. And she has a very nice personality.
YASMIN BY ANAIS Her hair is as brown as a chocolate cake. In her hair is a sparkly green clip. Her small ears are pierced with diamond earrings. Her eyes as brown as melted chocolate, a soft but pointy nose sticks out of her face. She is an excellent drawer. She can draw horses, people and many other things. She likes to eat pizza and chocolate. She enjoys horse riding a lot. She is one of my friends.
MY FRIEND CUBA BY CHRISTIAN Cuba has light brown hair. Really shiny teeth like a cloud. Bluey green eyes like a frog. Brown spotty face like cookies and cream. Pointy nose like a witch. Fast as a car, strong as a gorilla, short eye lashes. Dark black shoes like space.
ALLEGRA BY ISLA She walked into the room. Her hair filled the room with gold. Her eyes are as blue as the sky on a sunny day. Her lips are as red as the ripest cherries. She is kind hearted. Her favourite colour is green. She is quite tall AND she is my sister.
FLOSSIE BY LEXI Flossie’s hair is as soft and as brown as milk chocolate and she always has it up in a perfect ponytail. Her eyes are half blue and half grey like the sky on a cloudy day and she has beautiful bright red lips. Her skin is a beautiful tanned colour.
LULU BY STELLA Lulu has short brown hair like a horse with a beautiful mane. Brown eyes like wet bark. Cute little cheeks that look like a chimpanzee. She is sometimes stubborn. She is a good friend to play with. She has a great personality. Pearly white teeth like a fruit bat. She is one of my best friends. CHRISTIAN BY NATHAN Christian’s teeth are white as snow. His hair is as black as space. Christian’s eyes are like brown chocolate. Christian’s skin is light brown. Christian loves playing Dragon Vale, BMX, Stick Man, City Story Metro and Temple Run on his iPod. Christian has a brother who is 3 years old.
